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Post by Kennedy Matthews on Jun 14, 2019 14:38:39 GMT -5
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Post by Guillotine (QDT) on Jun 14, 2019 16:34:37 GMT -5
Ah maaaaaaaan! I think I'm up against RP of the week for the second time running. Sucks to be QDT! Very good work. There was a really great mix of content and a greater assurance in your writing than I've seen you produce before. I was extremely impressed by the level of knowledge you showed into my character. One thing I love to do is find old stuff the writer wrote long ago and reference it subtly to get a pop from my opposition handler (in a good way, not trying to piss them off personally). You did that for me. At the end of the day, probably the most satisfying thing many of us feel here is recognition from our peers. While you did a good job of cutting down QDT, you also made me the handler feel warm and fuzzy inside by the effort you made. I especially laughed when I saw that Kennedy had gone to Bognor Regis Although I'm gonna have to muster a hellacious RP even to stand a chance, I'm so pleased for you and the jump in level you've taken on this RP. I've noticed steady improvement for quite a while but this time you've just leapt. I'm also looking forward to seeing more of the Royal Family dynamic, particularly this continued tension between Kennedy and Lissie. It feels a bit like Faarooq and The Rock in Nation of Domination circa 1997.
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Post by Kennedy Matthews on Jun 14, 2019 23:39:18 GMT -5
Ah maaaaaaaan! I think I'm up against RP of the week for the second time running. Sucks to be QDT! Very good work. There was a really great mix of content and a greater assurance in your writing than I've seen you produce before. I was extremely impressed by the level of knowledge you showed into my character. One thing I love to do is find old stuff the writer wrote long ago and reference it subtly to get a pop from my opposition handler (in a good way, not trying to piss them off personally). You did that for me. At the end of the day, probably the most satisfying thing many of us feel here is recognition from our peers. While you did a good job of cutting down QDT, you also made me the handler feel warm and fuzzy inside by the effort you made. I especially laughed when I saw that Kennedy had gone to Bognor Regis Although I'm gonna have to muster a hellacious RP even to stand a chance, I'm so pleased for you and the jump in level you've taken on this RP. I've noticed steady improvement for quite a while but this time you've just leapt. I'm also looking forward to seeing more of the Royal Family dynamic, particularly this continued tension between Kennedy and Lissie. It feels a bit like Faarooq and The Rock in Nation of Domination circa 1997. Means a lot QDT. I admire you as a writer. I really wanted to try hard against you and Kyle.
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Post by Kennedy Matthews on Jun 23, 2019 17:37:58 GMT -5
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Post by Roger Payton Jr on Jun 23, 2019 18:39:21 GMT -5
So the biggest takeaway I have is the voice of the character and the forced dialect is incredibly off putting and a struggle to get through. Coming from a Brit, when people force the accent it's as bad as people trying to force strong Irish or like, Japanese. I get what you're going for but it is nothing but detrimental. Be confident in your character and the portrayal, people will understand them more than you think. What the fuck mate? Is a billion times better than Wot the fook mate? Like I can barely get through a Dandy promo because of the 'mount o' 'breveations. I get the sentiment, but gosh is it hard reading. Trust your audience guys!
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Post by Kennedy Matthews on Jun 23, 2019 18:48:14 GMT -5
So the biggest takeaway I have is the voice of the character and the forced dialect is incredibly off putting and a struggle to get through. Coming from a Brit, when people force the accent it's as bad as people trying to force strong Irish or like, Japanese. I get what you're going for but it is nothing but detrimental. Be confident in your character and the portrayal, people will understand them more than you think. What the fuck mate? Is a billion times better than Wot the fook mate? Like I can barely get through a Dandy promo because of the 'mount o' 'breveations. I get the sentiment, but gosh is it hard reading. Trust your audience guys! Truly appreciate this. Im gonna find a good middle ground
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Post by Dandy DiVito on Jun 25, 2019 19:40:18 GMT -5
I can barely get through a Dandy promo because of the 'mount o' 'breveations. Good thing I’m writing for me then, eh?
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Post by Roger Payton Jr on Jun 26, 2019 4:11:05 GMT -5
I can barely get through a Dandy promo because of the 'mount o' 'breveations. Good thing I’m writing for me then, eh? Not a knock, you're ace. Just a personal prose preference. Keep on banging brotha!
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Post by Kennedy Matthews on Jul 18, 2019 22:52:15 GMT -5
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Post by Kennedy Matthews on Aug 16, 2019 14:22:30 GMT -5
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Post by Kennedy Matthews on Sept 18, 2019 3:40:25 GMT -5
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