Trapson
Professional Wrestler
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Post by Trapson on Jun 13, 2019 20:29:12 GMT -5
Pedro definitely needs to join this thread now, just for this theory. Pedro and I spent more time talking about how Gordon Bombay is the Jon Gruden of pee-wee hockey than we did booking the fed we ran. Also, Ariel's last RP for Evo2 is there if you're bored and/or had a hard day at work.
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Post by Odin Balfore on Jun 13, 2019 20:31:30 GMT -5
my Mr. Blonde theory is worse
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Post by Kennedy Matthews on Jun 14, 2019 14:07:16 GMT -5
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Post by Corey Bull on Jun 14, 2019 19:43:27 GMT -5
my Mr. Blonde theory is worse Must....know....theory....cant resist curiosity
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Post by Odin Balfore on Jun 14, 2019 19:59:48 GMT -5
my Mr. Blonde theory is worse Must....know....theory....cant resist curiosity
Prior to the Diamond Heist, Mr. Blonde was retired and had a wife in a sleepy town and worked as a mechanic. They adopt a son and then that son gets in trouble and Mr. Blonde can understand because thats his life but he doesnt want that life for his son. That son, Jesse, has to help a sea world type attraction and bonds with a whale named willy. The events of this, later told as Free Willy, forces him to go back to a life of Crime after being fingerd by a corrupt sea park owner and needing one last job to pay off all the debts and fees as a result from his son freeing a well insured whale owned by a multi million dollar amusement corporation. This leads to Reservoir Dogs and Mr. Blonde going insane because he knows if he fails, its all over. Thats why takes the cop hostage for leverage and ends up killing him when its apparent that he cant let him go. Due to the mistrust of Mr. Orange ( whos been on the hunt for blonde from the Free Willy saga ) Both men know who they are. White and the big boss get caught in that stand off and they all die. Except Mr. Pink who gets away but then gets picked up and arrested at the end of Reservoir Dogs during the end credit scene That then leads to send spending time in prison and getting out and being homeless due to his felonies and only wants one thing , a simple taste of freedom a sausage mcmuffin - which he gets from a out of work toll both guard in Sonny, as he's on his way to bring his adopted son, Julian to get breakfast BOOM Free Willy -> Reservoir Dogs -> Big Daddy shared universe. Fight me Tarantino
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Post by Beau Del Sol on Jun 14, 2019 20:15:17 GMT -5
Must....know....theory....cant resist curiosity
Prior to the Diamond Heist, Mr. Blonde was retired and had a wife in a sleepy town and worked as a mechanic. They adopt a son and then that son gets in trouble and Mr. Blonde can understand because thats his life but he doesnt want that life for his son. That son, Jesse, has to help a sea world type attraction and bonds with a whale named willy. The events of this, later told as Free Willy, forces him to go back to a life of Crime after being fingerd by a corrupt sea park owner and needing one last job to pay off all the debts and fees as a result from his son freeing a well insured whale owned by a multi million dollar amusement corporation. This leads to Reservoir Dogs and Mr. Blonde going insane because he knows if he fails, its all over. Thats why takes the cop hostage for leverage and ends up killing him when its apparent that he cant let him go. Due to the mistrust of Mr. Orange ( whos been on the hunt for blonde from the Free Willy saga ) Both men know who they are. White and the big boss get caught in that stand off and they all die. Except Mr. Pink who gets away but then gets picked up and arrested at the end of Reservoir Dogs during the end credit scene That then leads to send spending time in prison and getting out and being homeless due to his felonies and only wants one thing , a simple taste of freedom a sausage mcmuffin - which he gets from a out of work toll both guard in Sonny, as he's on his way to bring his adopted son, Julian to get breakfast BOOM Free Willy -> Reservoir Dogs -> Big Daddy shared universe. Fight me Tarantino RD>free willy>big daddy... there it’s fixed.
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Post by Wade Moor on Jun 14, 2019 22:22:03 GMT -5
You unlock this door with the key of imagination. Beyond it is another dimension—a dimension of sound, a dimension of sight, a dimension of mind. You're moving into a land of both shadow and substance, of things and ideas. You've just crossed over into the Twilight Zone.
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Post by Corey Bull on Jun 14, 2019 22:49:09 GMT -5
Must....know....theory....cant resist curiosity
Prior to the Diamond Heist, Mr. Blonde was retired and had a wife in a sleepy town and worked as a mechanic. They adopt a son and then that son gets in trouble and Mr. Blonde can understand because thats his life but he doesnt want that life for his son. That son, Jesse, has to help a sea world type attraction and bonds with a whale named willy. The events of this, later told as Free Willy, forces him to go back to a life of Crime after being fingerd by a corrupt sea park owner and needing one last job to pay off all the debts and fees as a result from his son freeing a well insured whale owned by a multi million dollar amusement corporation. This leads to Reservoir Dogs and Mr. Blonde going insane because he knows if he fails, its all over. Thats why takes the cop hostage for leverage and ends up killing him when its apparent that he cant let him go. Due to the mistrust of Mr. Orange ( whos been on the hunt for blonde from the Free Willy saga ) Both men know who they are. White and the big boss get caught in that stand off and they all die. Except Mr. Pink who gets away but then gets picked up and arrested at the end of Reservoir Dogs during the end credit scene That then leads to send spending time in prison and getting out and being homeless due to his felonies and only wants one thing , a simple taste of freedom a sausage mcmuffin - which he gets from a out of work toll both guard in Sonny, as he's on his way to bring his adopted son, Julian to get breakfast BOOM Free Willy -> Reservoir Dogs -> Big Daddy shared universe. Fight me Tarantino
Duuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuude
That is fucking heavy. Trippy...and so dam accurate!
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Post by Odin Balfore on Jun 14, 2019 23:14:47 GMT -5
I think this threads just gonna turn into my coked up fan theories lol
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Post by Kennedy Matthews on Jun 14, 2019 23:19:50 GMT -5
I think this threads just gonna turn into my coked up fan theories lol No feedback for the Queen?
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Post by Odin Balfore on Jun 14, 2019 23:29:53 GMT -5
I'll hook this up over the weekend
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Post by Kennedy Matthews on Jun 14, 2019 23:31:14 GMT -5
I'll hook this up over the weekend Fuck yeah! Allfather!
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Post by Odin Balfore on Jun 15, 2019 14:16:14 GMT -5
I'll hook this up over the weekend Fuck yeah! Allfather! Roleplay: Year of the Royal Family Handler: Kennedy Matthews Overall thoughts: prolly one of Kennedys better rps Rating Overview Scene Description: 3 Character Development: 3 Shoot: 4 Flow: 4 RATING: 3.5 of 5 ___________________________________ CRITICAL REVIEW Um, do you want me to read OFF camera stuff? I never really got that concept. You write it so the characters dont know it but I as the reader knows it so then I as the reader will use it in a promo. IDK its sketchy stuff. I certainly lost to fully OFF camera promos before and Rps that were all CD. However, you had a mixed balance. I would suggest ending with match shoot but that's a personal take and hardly detracts from the piece. You wrote a full rp but it seems short. I was wanting for things to expand. The dialogue feels wooden but that's prolly just from the character being rich and british. These arnt negatives but everything is well done so i gotta nit pick a bit. The putting aside differences with Lissie was good for the sake of Estrella The third scene was prolly your worst, Kennedy is just sitting alone in a park and that's kinda boring. At least in scene 2 you were training. I would have scrapped scene 3 and just stuck it into scene 2 then used the saved words for CD if needed. 4th scene I didnt understand, like, Kennedy kept something from the royals because.. Reasons? However I guess it sets up lizies rp, so that works. How do you make a good promo better? Optimal choices. Dialogue, scene set up CD. everything. You put the bulk of your words into shoot but I’m not sure if im sold on Kennedy winning. It wasn't bad but idk if im convinced. _______________________ SUGGESTIONS None really. Just fine tune and optimization that comes with knowing the character
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Post by Kennedy Matthews on Jun 15, 2019 15:09:17 GMT -5
Roleplay: Year of the Royal Family Handler: Kennedy Matthews Overall thoughts: prolly one of Kennedys better rps Rating Overview Scene Description: 3 Character Development: 3 Shoot: 4 Flow: 4 RATING: 3.5 of 5 ___________________________________ CRITICAL REVIEW Um, do you want me to read OFF camera stuff? I never really got that concept. You write it so the characters dont know it but I as the reader knows it so then I as the reader will use it in a promo. IDK its sketchy stuff. I certainly lost to fully OFF camera promos before and Rps that were all CD. However, you had a mixed balance. I would suggest ending with match shoot but that's a personal take and hardly detracts from the piece. You wrote a full rp but it seems short. I was wanting for things to expand. The dialogue feels wooden but that's prolly just from the character being rich and british. These arnt negatives but everything is well done so i gotta nit pick a bit. The putting aside differences with Lissie was good for the sake of Estrella The third scene was prolly your worst, Kennedy is just sitting alone in a park and that's kinda boring. At least in scene 2 you were training. I would have scrapped scene 3 and just stuck it into scene 2 then used the saved words for CD if needed. 4th scene I didnt understand, like, Kennedy kept something from the royals because.. Reasons? However I guess it sets up lizies rp, so that works. How do you make a good promo better? Optimal choices. Dialogue, scene set up CD. everything. You put the bulk of your words into shoot but I’m not sure if im sold on Kennedy winning. It wasn't bad but idk if im convinced. _______________________ SUGGESTIONS None really. Just fine tune and optimization that comes with knowing the character Ty Odin
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Post by Alex Richards on Jun 16, 2019 19:57:43 GMT -5
Must....know....theory....cant resist curiosity
Prior to the Diamond Heist, Mr. Blonde was retired and had a wife in a sleepy town and worked as a mechanic. They adopt a son and then that son gets in trouble and Mr. Blonde can understand because thats his life but he doesnt want that life for his son. That son, Jesse, has to help a sea world type attraction and bonds with a whale named willy. The events of this, later told as Free Willy, forces him to go back to a life of Crime after being fingerd by a corrupt sea park owner and needing one last job to pay off all the debts and fees as a result from his son freeing a well insured whale owned by a multi million dollar amusement corporation. This leads to Reservoir Dogs and Mr. Blonde going insane because he knows if he fails, its all over. Thats why takes the cop hostage for leverage and ends up killing him when its apparent that he cant let him go. Due to the mistrust of Mr. Orange ( whos been on the hunt for blonde from the Free Willy saga ) Both men know who they are. White and the big boss get caught in that stand off and they all die. Except Mr. Pink who gets away but then gets picked up and arrested at the end of Reservoir Dogs during the end credit scene That then leads to send spending time in prison and getting out and being homeless due to his felonies and only wants one thing , a simple taste of freedom a sausage mcmuffin - which he gets from a out of work toll both guard in Sonny, as he's on his way to bring his adopted son, Julian to get breakfast BOOM Free Willy -> Reservoir Dogs -> Big Daddy shared universe. Fight me Tarantino Why do I feel like I would watch an Odin Balfore penned movie?
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Post by Wade Moor on Jun 16, 2019 22:13:03 GMT -5
Prior to the Diamond Heist, Mr. Blonde was retired and had a wife in a sleepy town and worked as a mechanic. They adopt a son and then that son gets in trouble and Mr. Blonde can understand because thats his life but he doesnt want that life for his son. That son, Jesse, has to help a sea world type attraction and bonds with a whale named willy. The events of this, later told as Free Willy, forces him to go back to a life of Crime after being fingerd by a corrupt sea park owner and needing one last job to pay off all the debts and fees as a result from his son freeing a well insured whale owned by a multi million dollar amusement corporation. This leads to Reservoir Dogs and Mr. Blonde going insane because he knows if he fails, its all over. Thats why takes the cop hostage for leverage and ends up killing him when its apparent that he cant let him go. Due to the mistrust of Mr. Orange ( whos been on the hunt for blonde from the Free Willy saga ) Both men know who they are. White and the big boss get caught in that stand off and they all die. Except Mr. Pink who gets away but then gets picked up and arrested at the end of Reservoir Dogs during the end credit scene That then leads to send spending time in prison and getting out and being homeless due to his felonies and only wants one thing , a simple taste of freedom a sausage mcmuffin - which he gets from a out of work toll both guard in Sonny, as he's on his way to bring his adopted son, Julian to get breakfast BOOM Free Willy -> Reservoir Dogs -> Big Daddy shared universe. Fight me Tarantino Why do I feel like I would watch an Odin Balfore penned movie? It’ll be: - how clash of the titans connects to pulp fiction and air bud. - all the dialogue will be from Home Alone & The OG Ninja Turtle trilogy And I’d watch it 100 times
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Post by Frank Venable on Jun 16, 2019 22:21:34 GMT -5
The Royal WeThe RP that I think would benefit the most from an Odin grade, as it's neither a Havoc RP where I couldn't use names or a simple 1K RP to not no show.
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Post by Odin Balfore on Jun 16, 2019 22:22:37 GMT -5
Why do I feel like I would watch an Odin Balfore penned movie? It’ll be: - how clash of the titans connects to pulp fiction and air bud. - all the dialogue will be from Home Alone & The OG Ninja Turtle trilogy And I’d watch it 100 times And there it is, Marv. That's the silvah tuna.
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Post by Corey Bull on Jun 17, 2019 0:36:31 GMT -5
I still think B.D. Wong's characters White Rose from Mr Robot, Dr. Henry Wu from Jurassic Park, and Dr George Huang from SUV are all the same person.
Fact: George Huang is not always on every episode, therefore in terms of how the SVU timeline works, you don't see him for days, weeks, or months. This leads me to believe, while he is suppose to be doing his other work which I've never seen him do, that he is really traveling. And not of his own accord, but rather of his split personality, White Rose.
Fact: White Rose has "her" watch set to go off every minute because she has a huge obsession with time. Yes, he is also the Chinese Minister of State security in the show, but that still fits into the whole time management. After all, White rose has a quote "Every hacker has her fixation. You hack people, I hack time." Which can be applied not only to the ability to do several other things, but also to "hacking" the genetic code of extinct animals. Which is why I believe White Rose poses as Henry Wu and George Huang. Yes, I believe she has the intelligence to be able to pass herself off as a Geneticists. And with an army of Chinese Hackers, locating the information to pull such a thing off would be child's play for a transgender with her intelligence. Couple that with the fact that the majority of the work at Jurassic Park and Jurassic World are done by other, unnamed scientists, its an easy disguise.
Or maybe I'm just crazy.
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Post by Odin Balfore on Jun 17, 2019 14:32:52 GMT -5
The Royal WeThe RP that I think would benefit the most from an Odin grade, as it's neither a Havoc RP where I couldn't use names or a simple 1K RP to not no show. Roleplay: The Royal We Handler: FPV Overall thoughts: blocky alcoholic Rating Overview Scene Description: 3 Character Development: 4 Shoot: 4 Flow: 5 RATING: 4 of 5 ___________________________________ CRITICAL REVIEW Great RP. Digged the narrative, liked the recaps of the Roy Speed thing. Like the coffee shop scene. Everything is enjoyable and just - where did you go wrong? I don’t think you did. I think you close a hot contest. What can you do to improve? Man, IDK. You cut your teeth with the best of us. I think its time you take FPV into a different level. Assess where FPV is and where you want him to do. I think you missed the boat when ADU B first got started because Speede, Dday, those are your boys. You all came up in this at the same time. You’re a big time established WCF talent with a blood feud rivalry with Speede. You should be trying to go for broke with that world title. I know you can make some deadly stuff but IDK if this was it. It was strong, no doubt but Alex is going on a tear. You did a lot to rip into everyone but you didnt really help yourself up. Maybe that's where you went wrong ultimately _______________________ SUGGESTIONS I suggest a re-tool. Edgier, grittier, hungrier. Give a reason to start a fight. Then hand out headshots like a mad man
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