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Post by Joey Flash on Mar 4, 2020 2:32:46 GMT -5
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Post by Lissie Hope on Mar 4, 2020 8:18:00 GMT -5
Get the fuck out of here.
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Post by Lissie Hope on Mar 4, 2020 8:23:34 GMT -5
But seriously, I creamed. I know you’re not interested in seeking improvement (because c’mon) because that was just masterful. You told a story within your promo, and it never felt like you were reaching for ways to connect the dots. A lot of people say you have to sell your opponent and the match and not just completely bury the opponent... you said fuck that and wrote what you wanted to write. And it read honest, it read truthful, and I believed everything he was saying (even if it makes me feel bad for JW). But yeah, that was just stupidly good. On a selfish note, thanks for all the times you gave me some props.
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Post by Joey Flash on Mar 4, 2020 8:40:52 GMT -5
But seriously, I creamed. I know you’re not interested in seeking improvement (because c’mon) because that was just masterful. You told a story within your promo, and it never felt like you were reaching for ways to connect the dots. A lot of people say you have to sell your opponent and the match and not just completely bury the opponent... you said fuck that and wrote what you wanted to write. And it read honest, it read truthful, and I believed everything he was saying (even if it makes me feel bad for JW). But yeah, that was just stupidly good. On a selfish note, thanks for all the times you gave me some props. The art of the burial is absolutely one of the most impressive things someone can do in eFedding. It turns a memorable promo into a potential classic for me! ...and I'm always around to talk the joys of the promo!
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Post by Quixote Della Torre on Mar 4, 2020 10:58:33 GMT -5
Shouldn't we spin this around and ask you to break it down for us?!
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Post by Joey Flash on Mar 4, 2020 11:00:16 GMT -5
Shouldn't we spin this around and ask you to break it down for us?! I'm on with Frank week after XIII - remind me then!
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Post by Quixote Della Torre on Mar 4, 2020 11:37:05 GMT -5
Shouldn't we spin this around and ask you to break it down for us?! I'm on with Frank week after XIII - remind me then! Will do. I'll also ask you what you said last time you were on the cast in response to "QDT" on word association. I think the audio cut out or maybe it was a "no comment" thing but, either way, the silence was deafening and I've had sleepless nights and been wetting my bed again. I NEEED TO KNOW!
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Dagvald Riddik
Professional Wrestler
Everything can be a joke if you just laugh
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Post by Dagvald Riddik on Mar 4, 2020 16:04:59 GMT -5
Just got to read it and all I really have to say is, “god damn.” You reminded me exactly who the fuck you are. The reason you’re so good, Flash, is you have the ability to put into words concepts that everyone is able to unerstand but not everyone is able to express.
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Post by Corey Bull on Mar 5, 2020 0:52:27 GMT -5
Jeezus...I think my character died just reading that. You sir have a gift that is impressive. If Bull wasn't so old...he might want to grow up to be Joey Flash.
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Post by Deleted on Mar 5, 2020 14:55:54 GMT -5
You could always add more scenery... jk
I wonder if you're aiming towards a straight through into the psyche of a - by Flash's perspective and by no means an indictment of anyone's character IRL or OOC - and how you could grip the heart like Kano. JW is known for playing chicken with trains, and I wonder if you could do more to convince those whom never listen to a threat from the reaper's own mouth that he has no chance in hell. I get that in a direct sense, but I'm looking forward to what you can do later to bring reality to a character lost in their dream world.
btw, Aladdin was a nice touch.
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Lockhart
Professional Wrestler
Playtime is over.
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Post by Lockhart on Mar 29, 2020 0:29:47 GMT -5
This was utter trash and you're probably going to get bodied by Scarecrow whenever you face him.
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