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Post by Geri Vayden on Feb 14, 2020 9:25:58 GMT -5
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Post by Psycho Vulcan Sentai (Kaz) on Feb 15, 2020 14:34:29 GMT -5
I think you took a really interesting angle on the Karlie/Nikki dichotomy. It was very creative, made RW&B seem divided, and put The Cool Kids at the fore of the match.
Shoot was top notch but character development was definitely lacking in the promo. When you do these character assassination pieces, you want to give the reader a sense of what drives your character outside of the standard fare (victory, championships, etc.) Nothing wrong with the piece as a whole, just a few more things you could have injected imo to really drive it home.
Try to explore Geri Miller more as a character in future pieces. Really get inside her head and find out what makes her tick.
Great work this week!
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Post by Geri Vayden on Feb 21, 2020 0:23:21 GMT -5
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