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Post by Talent Enhancers on Jun 12, 2018 15:53:49 GMT -5
when I type up my roleplays I can go back and fix grammar and make them better to read. Will it help me win here in AW if I do that or does that not matter? Also tryed some new color coding in this RP does that make it better? i noticed that you guys RP a bit longer than I'm used to so I added more content with this roleplay new. here is link to my new one! actionwrestling.freeforums.net/thread/1101/buns-out-guns-tag-titles
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Bonnie Blue
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Post by Bonnie Blue on Jun 12, 2018 16:22:49 GMT -5
when I type up my roleplays I can go back and fix grammar and make them better to read. Will it help me win here in AW if I do that or does that not matter? Also tryed some new color coding in this RP does that make it better? i noticed that you guys RP a bit longer than I'm used to so I added more content with this roleplay new. here is link to my new one! actionwrestling.freeforums.net/thread/1101/buns-out-guns-tag-titlesHey, just want to say, good rp! I like your voice, the way you express yourself, the shoot was overall solid. You're used to shorter promos, and that's cool. You say a lot in fewer words. You have a good style that flows naturally and is easy to read. I would suggest using a different color for either character to differentiate between who's saying what, it'll make it easier to read. Check out this post for a detailed breakdown of what judges are looking for: actionwrestling.freeforums.net/thread/127/judge-rpsAlso, I'm pretty sure you can make edits for grammar and coding after you post. (Oh, and use Google docs if you don't already, it's a lifesaver.)
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Post by Beau Del Sol on Jun 12, 2018 21:07:57 GMT -5
Add a strory too. That’ll help a lot.
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Post by Abbi Stein on Jun 16, 2018 22:16:48 GMT -5
Some mjnor tips:
Like Bon said, it's better if each dude has his own color. I know, it's a little bit more work; but it is worth it in the end.
Also, don't concern yourself too much with rp length. A lot of us have a history to pull from and know each other well, so we can dive more in depth. It comes with time; don't get discouraged just because you're starting out. Besides, a well-told 1k story will beat a longwinded and confusing 4k rp every time.
Like Frostbite said, it's all about telling your story. Character building gives us an idea as to who your people are. Tell us where they're at, what they're doing, how they feel. Flesh out their history, their home lives. Give us PEOPLE to relate to, and I promise you'll get better results.
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Post by Talent Enhancers on Jun 19, 2018 0:30:48 GMT -5
I posted my new rp at actionwrestling.freeforums.net/thread/1174/shoot-get-got-lincolnI love your advice and really worked on this RP. Ive used this style before in another Facebook fed that wanted more than shoot-style roleplay. I still shot and yeah i know its not a lot of shoot but I only had 1k. Lincoln is really good too so I had to be sure I hit every mark.
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Bonnie Blue
Professional Wrestler
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Post by Bonnie Blue on Jun 19, 2018 6:56:12 GMT -5
I dug it! Good material, and the color made it tons easier to read.
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Post by Abbi Stein on Jun 22, 2018 12:51:25 GMT -5
Color addition. ☑ Character depth. ☑
You're already improving, and I sincerely enjoyed reading that. Keep at it; once you hit your groove and REALLY start going, you're going to be a top star around here.
Great work so far, bruv.
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Post by Talent Enhancers on Jun 25, 2018 4:09:16 GMT -5
Thank you all you guys. You are great. I love going back to this style. Think im going to keep it going. Its fun for me.
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