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Post by The Swallowing on Jul 23, 2020 13:46:40 GMT -5
SPOILERS BELOW IF YOU HAVEN'T READ YET DON'T CONTINUE
The longest arc in Lisstory ended this week, and I'm pretty devastated. Removing the only support system Lissie has had from day one is something I'm going to grow to regret, I feel, but it was a story I wanted to tell when Addy introduced the idea of her falling for him back in April. Felt it was a tremendous way to glue all of our arcs and I'm really happy with what we accomplished.
If anyone has any thoughts on it, I would love to hear them.
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Post by Carter Shaw on Jul 23, 2020 16:06:05 GMT -5
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Can't believe you killed him off after all this coma time!
Ha So there's probably a good 2 week window of shows in the middle of this arc where I didn't get to read in-depth RPs thanks to busy-ness, but we still don't know why he was jumped so brutally way back around Evolution, right?
I think you guys used a brilliant story-arc to transition the Swallowing tag team from what felt like an inorganic, kinda-forced friendship storyline to genuine character connection through their love for Robbie. The writing was always great, and ofcourse he dies at 11:11, the moment Lissie makes the purchase of a blossoming flower.
That rose is gonna be dead in the next RP, isn't it...
You both have come up with such clever ways to tell stories around your shoot since putting the team together, whether with big 'one-post' collaboration or sharing two sides of the same story in separate RPs. I have not hesitated in the past to shoot you guys a message when you've blown my mind.
This story didn't blow my mind, but it did make my heart ache. And it was because of the way you guys devised telling this 'concluding' part of the chapter. Addy's RP ending with HOPE...and ironically, that HOPE going away suddenly at the end of Lissie's.
*STANDING OVATION*
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