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Post by Estrella Luiz ✨ on Nov 29, 2019 16:57:55 GMT -5
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Jordan
Professional Wrestler
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Post by Jordan on Nov 29, 2019 17:03:12 GMT -5
Yeah, this is pretty nice actually. There's still room for improvement as I feel this is that first step in the right direction, but it's good. The biggest thing as far as your prospects haven't been your ability to improve and it's not like you've been a bad writer, but I think there are people in this hobby who are smart enough to climb and improve, but just feel directionless in what they're saying. With Estrella, I'd previously noticed a tendency to self indulge in caddy banter without really aiming "points" at the opponent as I'll put it. This has shoot that makes some points. I like shoot that makes some points. I think this is a nice promo. It's an uptrend in writing/roleplaying, so keep it up with more of that focus on points going forward.
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