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Post by Derrick Vayden on Apr 13, 2019 11:25:36 GMT -5
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Post by Gravedigger on Apr 18, 2019 5:53:48 GMT -5
While as fedheads we don't normally give direct feedback, I want to point something out. Your comments about not doing enough to win the match are a common belief in cases like this. The thing is, a loss isn't always because you didn't do enough, sometimes it's because the opponent just did better. I'm not saying this was necessarily the case as I'd have to re-read your RP as well as the opponent(s).
As writers there's always things we can do to improve, but don't think that just because you lost that it's because your writing wasn't enough to win the match. Oftentimes the person who is judged as the winner is because we liked specific things in their RP more than yours. You're competing with the other person, not necessarily yourself.
Hopefully this makes sense and doesn't sound like babbling. Anyone else reading this that wants to give specific feedback on his RP can feel free to do so.
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