Post by vespertine on Aug 11, 2024 13:40:47 GMT -5
Fave lines Apex 6
"You promised a revolution for the tag team division Cedrone but you failed to deliver on that promise. You've been holding on to those Tag Team titles for weeks now with no defense. That's not the sign of a Champion that wants to take the division to the next level, that's the sign of a scared Champion who knows their time with Belts are numbered ever since Worst Generation knocked in the door and came into DPW and now that time is here because it's not about what if we win or when we win its now about when we take those tag team Championships on Apex in a few days, you can breathe with a sign of relief that the Worst Generation has taken the pressure of being the best of your hands because in just a few days we are going to prove without a shadow of a doubt that the Worst Generation sits at the pinnacle of tag team wrestling!"- Worst Generation (Wow, that's a lot to take in right there. I can see why you two are one of the best. Keep up the good work!)
“Don’t think that your little words were lost on us. We saw what you did there. And that will probably come back and hit you right between your eyes. Congratulations on winning that gold belt you carry but it will be the defending of it that will be your legacy. With my name on your lips it shows that you see the greatness that is debuting and want in at the beginning of this new chapter and I approve.”- Abdul Hussain (I like this was said. It reminds me of how I used to make Ves talk to others by telling them what they were going to say to her. I think I was the only one that it worked on. Oh well you're doing very well. Keep it up."
"When that bell rings, you’ll realise the Wolf is hungry. Because when the Wolf is hungry… he bloody eats!"- Freddy Lamb (Yes he bloody well does. Wow. I loved the visual on this. Keep up the good work.)
“I've always felt like I was disappearing. Like I was invisible. For as long as I can remember. I don't know if it’s made me better at hurting people, but I know this; this feeling, it does things to you. Feeling like you don’t matter. Being bitter and angry all the time just... eats away at you. It destroys your relationships, all the connections you make your whole life. And that makes your life feel like an eternity. But eternity is not what we perceive it to be”- Jeramiah Ellis (I like the fact that he is a deep thinker and the only conclusion he comes up with always is to hurt people. I can see him as some sort of Shepard leading his flock and then turning it into a cult of some sort. You had a good ideas. keep it up!)
"So poetic that it’s you, Teo. We’ve been through so much together over the years, both in arms and as chippy pseudo-rivals, though always maintaining that sense of brotherhood that brought us together in the first place. Funny enough, our union as The People’s Choice alongside Vic always felt a little inadvertently defiant against the mismanagement of a showrunner like Seth Lerch. History has a way of looping back when you least expect it to. Exit the bastard man and enter Zaslav, Pettis, and Downfall. This trio with goals of rejuvenation for a company and industry that both mutually felt the impact of a downward shift in the health and prosperity of the sport."- Spencer Adams (You know me, I'm a sucker for a bit of a history between wrestlers in RPs. Something to show who you were and why did what you did. You were here before, right? The way you project this character I can see why you were one of the greats. Great work man!)
"But none of them will, some of them have a little bit of momentum but none of them has the sheer desire that have to win, and more importantly NEED, and let me tell you all something boys and girls, I NEED this win more than any of you, and in this match, I’m gonna do it.”- Tj Alexander (nothing like exuding confidence before a match and telling everyone how it's going to be.)
"The grey is where I thrive. The grey gives me leeway to take a claw hammer to the testicles of the any man and feel no guilt. The grey is where I allow my urges to come to fruition when I take a brick to the skull of a man walking his dog. The grey allows me to take everything I want and keep it..." Addy A (Fuck you make this hard. You had many good lines in here. Is this somehow referring to 50 shades of Grey. I hope so, it made it seem all that much more better. You writing is really excellent. Sometimes I wish I had a story like yours to tell. Oh well.... Anyway, good work, keep it up.)
"Entitlement. It’s the thing that’s the bane of this industry. Slowly killing it because everyone thinks they are deserving of anything they find their heart desires. Maybe it’s somebody who thinks they deserve a better spot on the card despite being here for a cup of coffee. Maybe it’s a bunch of selfish dipshits trying to return to a place they left high and dry because they smelt a new owner who would stroke their fragile little egos to completion."- Gerard Angelo (This was the first sentence. It should've been the first sentence, it would've captured the reader quicker than what you did start with. I love this sentence because you're telling people that you deserved this and everyone else thinks they are entitled to what YOU deserve. Good work!)
"But there’s always a caveat, isn’t there? Where there is smoke, there’s fire… I’ve heard the whispers and read the rumors on the dirt sheets. The prevailing theory says I had something to do with the violent attack on Kyle Shane by the clown from hell. That I’m to blame because I was the benefactor of a moment in time and not the rightful victor of a crucial match. Here we go again… "- Tatiana Jolee (Making this hard on me are you. You had so many good lines in this one I couldn't pick just one. Alas I had to so here you go. My love for your writing knows no bounds. I could read a book of yours if you wrote one anyday and you would automatically be my favorite writer, next to Lee of course. Good job!)
“You expect me to believe you don’t want a title with that haircut. That haircut screams vanity Anthony and with vanity comes pride. And pride is what drives people towards accolades. So that statement, that’s a straight up lie. As for leaving scars, well, I’ve already got my share of those. I’ve fought all over the world. And in every country I’ve fought in I’ve left part of myself. Whether it be blood, tears or pieces of my very soul I have left part of Alex Andrews everywhere I’ve been. Because unlike you I don’t lie about why I do this. I do this to leave a legacy. I do this to leave a very mark on the greatest sport this world has ever seen. I do this to remind the fans why they call me the Showstealer! So tomorrow night, live in Bridgeport, you better get right with yourself on why you do this. Because If you don’t, I won’t be the one leaving Apex with new scars.”- Alex Andrews (Legacy and Scars, the two biggest things we compete for in this business. You aren't kidding. Good job.)
“Let me make one thing clear for you, old man. If you want to face me, that's fine. Be a man about it and issue the challenge. I will Be more than happy to beat down on you, even take that little shiny title of yours. If you make the mistake of making that challenge, you better be prepared to fight like your life depends on it. I won't be holding my punches at all.” - Eddie Williams (Wow tell him how you really feel, eh? Nice work.)
"And if that jubilee don’t come… Maybe I’ll meet you on the run."- Brandon Leno (I get it, it's a song verse, but one I've never heard yet. I love it when songs verses get added to RPs. Keep up the good work.)
"One of us wins. One of us breaks out. The rest of you keep going around the vortex that is the Yet-another-multi-person-match. Wash, rinse, repeat…. “- Tetsuo (Can't say much more than what you said here. I like how this whirlpool was phrased.)
"This is your chance to set the tone for your little reunion tour. To come out and play the hits, hear the pop, look at the crowd and smile like it once was. To relive the glory without any hiccups to spoil what will be a dramatic and fan-pleasing return! Well…spoiler alert. Times have changed, Spencer. You’ve been away, and no matter what words you may use, no matter how you try to spin it, there’s a reason why they coined the term ring rust. "- Teo Blaze (You two have history. A history some of us never saw the first time round and need to see it this time around. You peak poke and prod. I want more. Give us more. Keep up the good work.)
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Hardcore RPs
"RP 3" Joey Madrox (Had a few references in there about WWE wrestlers. Didn't know we were in that world but it worked. Keep it up.)
"RP 3" Apokolypse (I see what you did, focusing on one person in each RP. That's a good idea that I need to do next time. You're Rps were all good but there can only be one, right? ANd this was the one.)
"RP 1" -Taga Loa, (It's like you lose steam after your first RP. I would think you want to keep up that momentum. Or it's just me, I like the way this one was worded over RP 2 and 3. Especially loved the line "Aw you done fucked up again." Don't mind me. I just read these. Keep up the good work. I like the direction you are taking this new character in.)
You're welcome to do your own set of fave lines. Just post them here. We all need the confidence builder that this is supposed to be. You all do excellent work. Keep it up. Make it hard on the judges. They'll love you even more for it.
"You promised a revolution for the tag team division Cedrone but you failed to deliver on that promise. You've been holding on to those Tag Team titles for weeks now with no defense. That's not the sign of a Champion that wants to take the division to the next level, that's the sign of a scared Champion who knows their time with Belts are numbered ever since Worst Generation knocked in the door and came into DPW and now that time is here because it's not about what if we win or when we win its now about when we take those tag team Championships on Apex in a few days, you can breathe with a sign of relief that the Worst Generation has taken the pressure of being the best of your hands because in just a few days we are going to prove without a shadow of a doubt that the Worst Generation sits at the pinnacle of tag team wrestling!"- Worst Generation (Wow, that's a lot to take in right there. I can see why you two are one of the best. Keep up the good work!)
“Don’t think that your little words were lost on us. We saw what you did there. And that will probably come back and hit you right between your eyes. Congratulations on winning that gold belt you carry but it will be the defending of it that will be your legacy. With my name on your lips it shows that you see the greatness that is debuting and want in at the beginning of this new chapter and I approve.”- Abdul Hussain (I like this was said. It reminds me of how I used to make Ves talk to others by telling them what they were going to say to her. I think I was the only one that it worked on. Oh well you're doing very well. Keep it up."
"When that bell rings, you’ll realise the Wolf is hungry. Because when the Wolf is hungry… he bloody eats!"- Freddy Lamb (Yes he bloody well does. Wow. I loved the visual on this. Keep up the good work.)
“I've always felt like I was disappearing. Like I was invisible. For as long as I can remember. I don't know if it’s made me better at hurting people, but I know this; this feeling, it does things to you. Feeling like you don’t matter. Being bitter and angry all the time just... eats away at you. It destroys your relationships, all the connections you make your whole life. And that makes your life feel like an eternity. But eternity is not what we perceive it to be”- Jeramiah Ellis (I like the fact that he is a deep thinker and the only conclusion he comes up with always is to hurt people. I can see him as some sort of Shepard leading his flock and then turning it into a cult of some sort. You had a good ideas. keep it up!)
"So poetic that it’s you, Teo. We’ve been through so much together over the years, both in arms and as chippy pseudo-rivals, though always maintaining that sense of brotherhood that brought us together in the first place. Funny enough, our union as The People’s Choice alongside Vic always felt a little inadvertently defiant against the mismanagement of a showrunner like Seth Lerch. History has a way of looping back when you least expect it to. Exit the bastard man and enter Zaslav, Pettis, and Downfall. This trio with goals of rejuvenation for a company and industry that both mutually felt the impact of a downward shift in the health and prosperity of the sport."- Spencer Adams (You know me, I'm a sucker for a bit of a history between wrestlers in RPs. Something to show who you were and why did what you did. You were here before, right? The way you project this character I can see why you were one of the greats. Great work man!)
"But none of them will, some of them have a little bit of momentum but none of them has the sheer desire that have to win, and more importantly NEED, and let me tell you all something boys and girls, I NEED this win more than any of you, and in this match, I’m gonna do it.”- Tj Alexander (nothing like exuding confidence before a match and telling everyone how it's going to be.)
"The grey is where I thrive. The grey gives me leeway to take a claw hammer to the testicles of the any man and feel no guilt. The grey is where I allow my urges to come to fruition when I take a brick to the skull of a man walking his dog. The grey allows me to take everything I want and keep it..." Addy A (Fuck you make this hard. You had many good lines in here. Is this somehow referring to 50 shades of Grey. I hope so, it made it seem all that much more better. You writing is really excellent. Sometimes I wish I had a story like yours to tell. Oh well.... Anyway, good work, keep it up.)
"Entitlement. It’s the thing that’s the bane of this industry. Slowly killing it because everyone thinks they are deserving of anything they find their heart desires. Maybe it’s somebody who thinks they deserve a better spot on the card despite being here for a cup of coffee. Maybe it’s a bunch of selfish dipshits trying to return to a place they left high and dry because they smelt a new owner who would stroke their fragile little egos to completion."- Gerard Angelo (This was the first sentence. It should've been the first sentence, it would've captured the reader quicker than what you did start with. I love this sentence because you're telling people that you deserved this and everyone else thinks they are entitled to what YOU deserve. Good work!)
"But there’s always a caveat, isn’t there? Where there is smoke, there’s fire… I’ve heard the whispers and read the rumors on the dirt sheets. The prevailing theory says I had something to do with the violent attack on Kyle Shane by the clown from hell. That I’m to blame because I was the benefactor of a moment in time and not the rightful victor of a crucial match. Here we go again… "- Tatiana Jolee (Making this hard on me are you. You had so many good lines in this one I couldn't pick just one. Alas I had to so here you go. My love for your writing knows no bounds. I could read a book of yours if you wrote one anyday and you would automatically be my favorite writer, next to Lee of course. Good job!)
“You expect me to believe you don’t want a title with that haircut. That haircut screams vanity Anthony and with vanity comes pride. And pride is what drives people towards accolades. So that statement, that’s a straight up lie. As for leaving scars, well, I’ve already got my share of those. I’ve fought all over the world. And in every country I’ve fought in I’ve left part of myself. Whether it be blood, tears or pieces of my very soul I have left part of Alex Andrews everywhere I’ve been. Because unlike you I don’t lie about why I do this. I do this to leave a legacy. I do this to leave a very mark on the greatest sport this world has ever seen. I do this to remind the fans why they call me the Showstealer! So tomorrow night, live in Bridgeport, you better get right with yourself on why you do this. Because If you don’t, I won’t be the one leaving Apex with new scars.”- Alex Andrews (Legacy and Scars, the two biggest things we compete for in this business. You aren't kidding. Good job.)
“Let me make one thing clear for you, old man. If you want to face me, that's fine. Be a man about it and issue the challenge. I will Be more than happy to beat down on you, even take that little shiny title of yours. If you make the mistake of making that challenge, you better be prepared to fight like your life depends on it. I won't be holding my punches at all.” - Eddie Williams (Wow tell him how you really feel, eh? Nice work.)
"And if that jubilee don’t come… Maybe I’ll meet you on the run."- Brandon Leno (I get it, it's a song verse, but one I've never heard yet. I love it when songs verses get added to RPs. Keep up the good work.)
"One of us wins. One of us breaks out. The rest of you keep going around the vortex that is the Yet-another-multi-person-match. Wash, rinse, repeat…. “- Tetsuo (Can't say much more than what you said here. I like how this whirlpool was phrased.)
"This is your chance to set the tone for your little reunion tour. To come out and play the hits, hear the pop, look at the crowd and smile like it once was. To relive the glory without any hiccups to spoil what will be a dramatic and fan-pleasing return! Well…spoiler alert. Times have changed, Spencer. You’ve been away, and no matter what words you may use, no matter how you try to spin it, there’s a reason why they coined the term ring rust. "- Teo Blaze (You two have history. A history some of us never saw the first time round and need to see it this time around. You peak poke and prod. I want more. Give us more. Keep up the good work.)
“Well fuck, last week was nearly perfect, nearly. I went into that with the idea that I was going to whip someone around by their nose hair, or something, just to make a point. What ended up happening was Lizzy fell on me due to Landon crashing into her from the top rope, and that’s how I ended up with a face full of blond hair crashing into me. That wasn’t my idea of a fun night, but, shit happens and everyone goes their separate ways. I keep on moving, and I keep steppin into this upcoming match. Some wouldn’t want me to step into that six way match, deeming it too big of a thing for me to even try to attempt. But I take that as a challenge in itself. To continue and do whatever I have to to make everything heard, by any means necessary.”- Niobe Martin (Loved how this was phrased. Keep on keeping on. Get right back up and dust yourself off. You do a good job. Just need a little more of the Nightmare aspect though. Keep up the good work.)
"Well allow me to end that delusion for ya…this fight on Monday night is nothing more than the two of you being fed to the lions! You’re being led to the lion’s den to two of the biggest and hungriest lions that DPW has in its arsenal. And once MAD and I are finished ripping you to shreds, and eatin’ you alive, the only way your little manager will be able to identify you is by the dental work in the aftermath…if ya know what I mean.”- Mad Company (Nice visuals. Love those. You two really gel together. keep it up.)
"If that's your arrogance, you can go hide. But look at you, you've got your ex-wife babying you and everything. You've got nothing to do but look in the mirror and wrestle, and wrestling for you is a big word. 'll tell you one thing, I'm sick of seeing the same kind of people coming into the federations. I'm handsome, I'm rich so I can afford it, I'm arrogant. Wow, what creativity, guys, well done! Shit, I wouldn't have thought of that myself."- Anthony Leonhart (You had me laughing for what its worth. Keep up the good work.)
"If that's your arrogance, you can go hide. But look at you, you've got your ex-wife babying you and everything. You've got nothing to do but look in the mirror and wrestle, and wrestling for you is a big word. 'll tell you one thing, I'm sick of seeing the same kind of people coming into the federations. I'm handsome, I'm rich so I can afford it, I'm arrogant. Wow, what creativity, guys, well done! Shit, I wouldn't have thought of that myself."- Anthony Leonhart (You had me laughing for what its worth. Keep up the good work.)
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Hardcore RPs
"RP 3" Joey Madrox (Had a few references in there about WWE wrestlers. Didn't know we were in that world but it worked. Keep it up.)
"RP 3" Apokolypse (I see what you did, focusing on one person in each RP. That's a good idea that I need to do next time. You're Rps were all good but there can only be one, right? ANd this was the one.)
"RP 1" -Taga Loa, (It's like you lose steam after your first RP. I would think you want to keep up that momentum. Or it's just me, I like the way this one was worded over RP 2 and 3. Especially loved the line "Aw you done fucked up again." Don't mind me. I just read these. Keep up the good work. I like the direction you are taking this new character in.)
You're welcome to do your own set of fave lines. Just post them here. We all need the confidence builder that this is supposed to be. You all do excellent work. Keep it up. Make it hard on the judges. They'll love you even more for it.