Fave Lines from our AW Stars for Payback
Feb 25, 2024 19:22:36 GMT -5
Jaice Wilds, Ned the Intern, and 5 more like this
Post by vespertine on Feb 25, 2024 19:22:36 GMT -5
Sitcom still away. So.... get ready for another round of Fave lines....
"And so, the saga between Roman Gunn and Jaice unfolded, leaving the audience eagerly anticipating the next chapter in the unpredictable world of professional wrestling."
- Roman Gunn
Comment: (The tale was lovely. I just couldn't figure out if you were RPing for Roman or for Jaice. I've done Rps like this and the comments I got were: "It looked like you were RPing more for your opponent than yourself so that's why you lost." I'm new so I guess it's a "you had to be there to believe it" kind of tale.")
"Forcing you to take a slice of reality by stealing away your last shot at that which you value most… that is going to be my crowning moment of Payback."
- Jaice Wilds
Comment: (Yeah, you go boy!)
"I want Payback for people who doubted me… I want Payback for all the times i’ve been wronged.. I want Payback for what that trick ass ho’ Vespertine had done…"
- Joey Madrox
Comment: (BEST RP EVER for you. I could only pick one line but this whole RP made me laugh so damn hard. I was sipping on Jack and Coke as I was reading this and I did a spittake onto my comp screen. Thanks for that. Keep up the good work.)
"That is the gravity I hold.....“That’s your story to tell.”
- Addy A,
Comment: (So well said even though there is a paragraph between them. I can't seem to get my mojo of writing like this again. I used to when there was never a word limit. I missed doing it because it was fun to read what a character was thinking or what a narrator said about that character. So, kudos for writing it like this. Also who are you and what happened to Addy, she swears like a sailor and puts everyone down but you didn't do that, this promo. Are you sick?)
"I’m sure ponds could be filled the amount of blood that has been shed in this arena. So many meaningful matches throughout the years, with so much on the line. But with everything on the line this Sunday night, rivers and oceans will run red with the blood shed in this very ring. Half of it will be from our match Doc. And all of it will be yours.”
- Jonny Cedone
Comment: (Love the imagery on this one. Two men enter, one man leaves.... barely. With a lot less blood. I hope the writers see this for the potential that it has and spots that could be filled.)
"I'm PHENOMENAL. At bein' TELEVISION CHAMPION. At wagin' WAR. At BEATING YOU."
- Jessie Lee
Comment: (Another phenomenal ending. Just so you know, I'm taking notes for my character's ending words.)
"Wrestling is an obsession. It’s a sickness. It’s a disease. It’s an addiction, and I don’t plan on quitting. I’ll feed it until it kills me."
- Driller Jaworski
Comment: (Every werestler's words ever. And yet they still ring true for everyone. Even in efedding)
"I'm the General of my own fate and you're the next plot on my map."
- Doc Holiday
Comment: (I'm always equating war references with wrestling for my character. I love that someone else does the same.)
" If you’re not prepared to bring all arms to bear and throw in the last brigade to the battle no matter how near or far victory might seem… Then you never deserved to win the war in the first place."
- Tatiana Jolee
Comment: (FUCK! You make this hard. The more we read, the more invested in your character we get. Every line is better than the last. How you do that? Again, I could place the entire promo in here but I like the war reference even though there were several.)
"I will prove once and for all that true greatness cannot be bought, it cannot be stolen, it can only be earned through hard work, dedication, and sacrifice."
- Teo Blaze
Comment: (Respect is earned. Never given. A mantra I (or Ves) goes by.)
I'm sensing a theme here....
"And so, the saga between Roman Gunn and Jaice unfolded, leaving the audience eagerly anticipating the next chapter in the unpredictable world of professional wrestling."
- Roman Gunn
Comment: (The tale was lovely. I just couldn't figure out if you were RPing for Roman or for Jaice. I've done Rps like this and the comments I got were: "It looked like you were RPing more for your opponent than yourself so that's why you lost." I'm new so I guess it's a "you had to be there to believe it" kind of tale.")
"Forcing you to take a slice of reality by stealing away your last shot at that which you value most… that is going to be my crowning moment of Payback."
- Jaice Wilds
Comment: (Yeah, you go boy!)
"I want Payback for people who doubted me… I want Payback for all the times i’ve been wronged.. I want Payback for what that trick ass ho’ Vespertine had done…"
- Joey Madrox
Comment: (BEST RP EVER for you. I could only pick one line but this whole RP made me laugh so damn hard. I was sipping on Jack and Coke as I was reading this and I did a spittake onto my comp screen. Thanks for that. Keep up the good work.)
"That is the gravity I hold.....“That’s your story to tell.”
- Addy A,
Comment: (So well said even though there is a paragraph between them. I can't seem to get my mojo of writing like this again. I used to when there was never a word limit. I missed doing it because it was fun to read what a character was thinking or what a narrator said about that character. So, kudos for writing it like this. Also who are you and what happened to Addy, she swears like a sailor and puts everyone down but you didn't do that, this promo. Are you sick?)
"I’m sure ponds could be filled the amount of blood that has been shed in this arena. So many meaningful matches throughout the years, with so much on the line. But with everything on the line this Sunday night, rivers and oceans will run red with the blood shed in this very ring. Half of it will be from our match Doc. And all of it will be yours.”
- Jonny Cedone
Comment: (Love the imagery on this one. Two men enter, one man leaves.... barely. With a lot less blood. I hope the writers see this for the potential that it has and spots that could be filled.)
"I'm PHENOMENAL. At bein' TELEVISION CHAMPION. At wagin' WAR. At BEATING YOU."
- Jessie Lee
Comment: (Another phenomenal ending. Just so you know, I'm taking notes for my character's ending words.)
"Wrestling is an obsession. It’s a sickness. It’s a disease. It’s an addiction, and I don’t plan on quitting. I’ll feed it until it kills me."
- Driller Jaworski
Comment: (Every werestler's words ever. And yet they still ring true for everyone. Even in efedding)
"I'm the General of my own fate and you're the next plot on my map."
- Doc Holiday
Comment: (I'm always equating war references with wrestling for my character. I love that someone else does the same.)
" If you’re not prepared to bring all arms to bear and throw in the last brigade to the battle no matter how near or far victory might seem… Then you never deserved to win the war in the first place."
- Tatiana Jolee
Comment: (FUCK! You make this hard. The more we read, the more invested in your character we get. Every line is better than the last. How you do that? Again, I could place the entire promo in here but I like the war reference even though there were several.)
"I will prove once and for all that true greatness cannot be bought, it cannot be stolen, it can only be earned through hard work, dedication, and sacrifice."
- Teo Blaze
Comment: (Respect is earned. Never given. A mantra I (or Ves) goes by.)
I'm sensing a theme here....