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Post by Ashton Thomas on Aug 16, 2022 20:23:32 GMT -5
Sorry guys and girls I'm somebody who likes to know what people are thinking I posted an RP for my match if anybody cares to take a look
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Post by The Ascension on Aug 20, 2022 20:48:38 GMT -5
I just finished reading Eden, not bad at all my friend. I see what you are going for and where it could go, solid character presentation so far. As “suggestions” (not that I feel I’m anyone to make those) go, I’d love to see you really lean in to making him a real trash person type. He feels very Hollywood corporate villain like, good way, but should lean into it more. Show some disgust with normal people, or laugh at a memory the opponent triggers and tell a story about how he ruined a family man’s life because it was 10 am on a Tuesdayz
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