Fave lines seggy for Blast 4/29
Apr 28, 2024 16:34:00 GMT -5
Karlie Nash, Teo Blaze, and 1 more like this
Post by vespertine on Apr 28, 2024 16:34:00 GMT -5
We have another round of fave lines from our favorite superstars. Good turn out everyone
"you have found yourself dancing with this devil is because Super Mario couldn’t manufacture big trouble in little china"- Addy A
(YAY! More pop culture references of yesteryear. I saw that movie. I thought it was ok. "Do you ever dance with the devil by the pale moon light." I never read comic books but I think Jack Nicholson was the best Joker after Heath Ledger but I'm assuming Joker always said that line in the comic books. I love your character, keep up the good work.)
"Whispers of oblivion echo in his heart/soul/mind"- NB
(A few lines not in consecutive order. They were just so poetic I thought I needed to put these out here. I do want more poem in your RPs. That's just me though probably.)
"I have been breaking records, setting the bar and building this business up to give people like you a fucking job… And you have the gall to call it garbage?? That's a funny way of saying you can't keep up".- Jaice Wilds
(Wow! Jaice showing why he is the OG of hardcore wrestling. But remember Extreme is different than hardcore.)
"Karma is a Gawd like that. And so am I.- Odin Balfore
(I feel attacked for some reason and I'm just a reader. But that's a good thing, because it means as a writer you are doing your job correctly. Keep up the good work)
"the grind never ends and Blast is going to be a coming out party for eNVy, and Jaice and TJ will be the party favors."- Karlie Nash
(O.....K....)
"you may have driven out a few people through fear from Action Wrestling Ves, but you not gonna drive me out, In fact it’s gonna drive me on, it’s gonna up the ante of me wanting to take those titles even more so."- TJ Alexander
(Something drives you like something is driving me. NICE! Love the fact that my drive is what's driving you on. It's great when other's promos give people ideas and inspirations for theirs, helps to keep the creative juices and ideas flowing. Keep up the good work.)
"his detour into darkness threatens the triumph of winning the Action Wrestling Tag Team Championship at Blast."- ODD
(A detour? Is that you call it? Ok, makes mine not look so bad now. But I do love how this is said to build up to the last part of this sentence and continue on with the CD being kidnapped and tortured. Keep up the good work.)
"An apple a day will keep…Doc Holiday away.”" - Jonny Cedrone
(Sure it will. I love how you equate a doc of war with an average doc and then the rundown of every other match going on at Blast. I've been wanting to do a rundown like this for years now and could never wrap my head around it. Keep it up.)
"Charge me with all of your might and enter to become gristle into the grinder. Because I'm approaching this, both as a man, and as something much more."- Sicko
(I want to add this whole RP because of it's beautiful mastery but I can only add a line. So this line stood out to me above all. Nothing is going to stop you from gaining Green's belt. Keep it up.)
"This place," Teo begins, his voice low, "it's like a graveyard for forgotten dreams." He paces slowly, his footsteps echoing off the cold concrete, each one a reminder of the weight of his recent defeat. "I never thought I'd find myself here, surrounded by shadows and echoes of what once was. But here I am, forced to confront the reality of the situation." - Teo Blaze
(Beautifully phrased. I love graveyards like that. Surrounded by shadows and echos and whispers and the dead. Always fun.)
"I need to win this title Odin. I need it like the air we breathe."- Muru
(And that's how every superstar should feel about wanting to have or keeping a title. It should always be about the air you breathe. That's wrestling for ya.)
"But then again, you have a history of fumbling the bag, don't you? You worked so hard to beat me and take my United States title, but you turned around and lost that to DRAUGR. So what happens if you beat me at Blast? Do you turn around and get immediately clotheslined out of the ring upon entering it? Recent history would say so. "- Doc Holiday
(Just ow! Punching a little below the belt. Love it. Good work.)
"Last year I had to battle the likes of Jonny Cedrone and Alice Gemini to even remain in the conversation. But now? Now I AM THE FUCKIN' CONVERSATION. I'm the bitch out here raising EVERY ungrateful bitch UP to levels that couldn't fuckin' IMAGINE. I'm the bunt that FORCING YOU to step up and REALLY put in some effort if you don't wanna end up as just another Henry Lancaster; a broken charity case predominately out of the job."- Jessie Lee
(I...want....more....history....like.... this. I could've put the entire promo in here but this one jumped out at me because I like history and I had to wade through it all just to get to this. Yes. You. Are. The conversation that is. The one everyone talks about. Even Odin. Keep it up.)
"You’re gonna get eaten alive being as soft as baby shit like you are. You said you didn’t know if you could do what I did to become champion. That’s why you won’t win. You don’t have the fucking stones to do what is necessary to be the top fucking dog in the industry."- Gerard Angelo
(Again ouch but let's see who wins the belt at the end of Blast. Wouldn't it be ironic if Muru did. After having been here only a month.)
Keep up the good work everyone. This was the kind of work I was expecting last week until somebody told me you all were waiting this week. I see why. Impressive.
"you have found yourself dancing with this devil is because Super Mario couldn’t manufacture big trouble in little china"- Addy A
(YAY! More pop culture references of yesteryear. I saw that movie. I thought it was ok. "Do you ever dance with the devil by the pale moon light." I never read comic books but I think Jack Nicholson was the best Joker after Heath Ledger but I'm assuming Joker always said that line in the comic books. I love your character, keep up the good work.)
"Whispers of oblivion echo in his heart/soul/mind"- NB
(A few lines not in consecutive order. They were just so poetic I thought I needed to put these out here. I do want more poem in your RPs. That's just me though probably.)
"I have been breaking records, setting the bar and building this business up to give people like you a fucking job… And you have the gall to call it garbage?? That's a funny way of saying you can't keep up".- Jaice Wilds
(Wow! Jaice showing why he is the OG of hardcore wrestling. But remember Extreme is different than hardcore.)
"Karma is a Gawd like that. And so am I.- Odin Balfore
(I feel attacked for some reason and I'm just a reader. But that's a good thing, because it means as a writer you are doing your job correctly. Keep up the good work)
"the grind never ends and Blast is going to be a coming out party for eNVy, and Jaice and TJ will be the party favors."- Karlie Nash
(O.....K....)
"you may have driven out a few people through fear from Action Wrestling Ves, but you not gonna drive me out, In fact it’s gonna drive me on, it’s gonna up the ante of me wanting to take those titles even more so."- TJ Alexander
(Something drives you like something is driving me. NICE! Love the fact that my drive is what's driving you on. It's great when other's promos give people ideas and inspirations for theirs, helps to keep the creative juices and ideas flowing. Keep up the good work.)
"his detour into darkness threatens the triumph of winning the Action Wrestling Tag Team Championship at Blast."- ODD
(A detour? Is that you call it? Ok, makes mine not look so bad now. But I do love how this is said to build up to the last part of this sentence and continue on with the CD being kidnapped and tortured. Keep up the good work.)
"An apple a day will keep…Doc Holiday away.”" - Jonny Cedrone
(Sure it will. I love how you equate a doc of war with an average doc and then the rundown of every other match going on at Blast. I've been wanting to do a rundown like this for years now and could never wrap my head around it. Keep it up.)
"Charge me with all of your might and enter to become gristle into the grinder. Because I'm approaching this, both as a man, and as something much more."- Sicko
(I want to add this whole RP because of it's beautiful mastery but I can only add a line. So this line stood out to me above all. Nothing is going to stop you from gaining Green's belt. Keep it up.)
"This place," Teo begins, his voice low, "it's like a graveyard for forgotten dreams." He paces slowly, his footsteps echoing off the cold concrete, each one a reminder of the weight of his recent defeat. "I never thought I'd find myself here, surrounded by shadows and echoes of what once was. But here I am, forced to confront the reality of the situation." - Teo Blaze
(Beautifully phrased. I love graveyards like that. Surrounded by shadows and echos and whispers and the dead. Always fun.)
"I need to win this title Odin. I need it like the air we breathe."- Muru
(And that's how every superstar should feel about wanting to have or keeping a title. It should always be about the air you breathe. That's wrestling for ya.)
"But then again, you have a history of fumbling the bag, don't you? You worked so hard to beat me and take my United States title, but you turned around and lost that to DRAUGR. So what happens if you beat me at Blast? Do you turn around and get immediately clotheslined out of the ring upon entering it? Recent history would say so. "- Doc Holiday
(Just ow! Punching a little below the belt. Love it. Good work.)
"Last year I had to battle the likes of Jonny Cedrone and Alice Gemini to even remain in the conversation. But now? Now I AM THE FUCKIN' CONVERSATION. I'm the bitch out here raising EVERY ungrateful bitch UP to levels that couldn't fuckin' IMAGINE. I'm the bunt that FORCING YOU to step up and REALLY put in some effort if you don't wanna end up as just another Henry Lancaster; a broken charity case predominately out of the job."- Jessie Lee
(I...want....more....history....like.... this. I could've put the entire promo in here but this one jumped out at me because I like history and I had to wade through it all just to get to this. Yes. You. Are. The conversation that is. The one everyone talks about. Even Odin. Keep it up.)
"You’re gonna get eaten alive being as soft as baby shit like you are. You said you didn’t know if you could do what I did to become champion. That’s why you won’t win. You don’t have the fucking stones to do what is necessary to be the top fucking dog in the industry."- Gerard Angelo
(Again ouch but let's see who wins the belt at the end of Blast. Wouldn't it be ironic if Muru did. After having been here only a month.)
Keep up the good work everyone. This was the kind of work I was expecting last week until somebody told me you all were waiting this week. I see why. Impressive.