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Post by Charlie 'The Ghost' Rossi on May 27, 2018 11:09:00 GMT -5
Very much needed. Thanks. I keep a lot of the format I have followed by added a lot more shoot to the promo. Love some honest feedback.
Charlie Rossi
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Post by Deleted on May 29, 2018 20:06:04 GMT -5
You have a good vocabulary and know how to tell a story. If I could name any downside, and yes I'm nitpicking here, umm.. maybe a bit dry? I enjoyed the return promo
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Post by Sam Kidsgrove on Jun 8, 2018 16:12:26 GMT -5
I love the structure, I love the execution and the style. What you're going for I can see and it'll be successful. It's not my cup of tea, but it's written well and I appreciate it.
My own personal tastes would be slightly less internal monologue and a bit more plot development, but what you do works in your way anyway, as in there isn't anything wrong with it.
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Post by Charlie 'The Ghost' Rossi on Jun 10, 2018 12:27:41 GMT -5
Thank you both. It's very hard to storyline and the plot when your not feuding or in a program that gives you a chance. The Rossi character is evolving and I will continue to work on it. Again thanks.
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