Post by Lissie Hope on May 7, 2020 10:23:34 GMT -5
Mentioned it briefly in the shoutbox, but I really dug it, dude. That promo really flowed well and you transitioned into Dandy perfectly. Described why you're back, what you've learned, and what you intend to do better. I think it's my favorite promo I've ever seen you do.
That said, you left a little meat on the bone. In the same vein as those who've responded to Carnivore, you had another 1K to work with (you did 1935/3000) and that is going to cost you, because you need to really use that word count offered to you against an opponent like Dandy.
That said, this is certainly a competitive roleplay against a main-event writer, and I'm proud of you, dude. Good shit.