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Post by Shadowlove on Nov 24, 2019 17:36:21 GMT -5
Delve into the mind of the handler behind the madness that is the seductive handsomeness of “The Handsome Half-breed” Shadowlove and his sweet and lovely femme fatale temptress, “ The Fashionista Sensi” Miss Miyamoto. Comments. Feedback. Questions & Answers.
The goal is to help those that are looking for help in order to help reach your character’s peak performance by gaining hands-on experience through practicum placement and mentorship by one of the ones considered to by one of the most immortal beloved characters both IC and OOC in AW.
****Disclaimer: The views and opinions expressed are those of the handler of "The Handsome Halfbreed" Shadowlove and do not necessarily reflect the official policy or position of Action Wrestling.****
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Flop
Professional Wrestler
Posts: 188
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Post by Flop on Nov 24, 2019 18:35:14 GMT -5
Flop it.
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Post by Deleted on Nov 25, 2019 4:42:44 GMT -5
How do I step up my Twitter game? And what Yoga positions will improve my core without looking weird?
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Post by Shadowlove on Nov 25, 2019 7:36:31 GMT -5
How did I know Flop would be the first visitor in the asylum? lol
Flop knows his character. Keep up the good Flop. You’ve mastered the Art of The Flop without having to...
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Post by Shadowlove on Nov 25, 2019 7:39:05 GMT -5
How do I step up my Twitter game? And what Yoga positions will improve my core without looking weird? Just remember to have fun, don’t take things to personal or seriously, and it’s good to be able to think of a good comeback on the fly IC when going back and forth on your fake Twitter war. It’s a good way to work on your shoot, especially response shoot, but don’t go to crazy, save your good shoot for your promo where it really counts.
Cosmic Egg Pose, Boat Pose (Navasana), Plank Pose, Forearm Plank, & Fallen Triangle With Leg Lift. Just own the yoga pants look, and no, I don’t have any custom-made Calvin Klein yoga pants for sale.
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Post by Quixote Della Torre on Nov 25, 2019 8:11:59 GMT -5
Thanks for doing this. General thoughts on QDT and how I can improve, if you please mate?
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Post by Shadowlove on Nov 25, 2019 12:07:48 GMT -5
Thanks for doing this. General thoughts on QDT and how I can improve, if you please mate? You’re very welcome, I blame Corey Bull, Corey Pasta, and Frank. lol
QDT has always been the standard bearer for how to do things right, especially if you’re questioning where you belong role-playing wise in AW. You started out in the CW division and shined as CW champion.
Your character is still a big influence in the CW division. I know you were a very big influence on Derek Vayden and look what he’s done in the CW division? QDT vs. Vayden is inevitable in my opinion.
You’ve skirted controversial subjects in a non-controversial way. I know that you’ve been nervous about pushing that envelope but you’re one of the ones that have always put out a disclaimer warning people of the fact beforehand, which is a good thing, especially if you’re unsure.
I like people that will try and push the envelope with their character, so to speak, I know that I’ve tried stuff that worked and stuff that didn’t work but when it works it’s magical. But you won’t know if it works if you don’t at least go for it and try. Moving out of the confines of the CW division and into what’s considered the mainstream, word count wise, with your performance in the Havoc Rumble and sub-sequential feud with Wade Moor definitely turned QDT into a main event character.
Time off can sometimes be a detriment and a hindrance for anyone’s character but it hasn’t really effected you character wise. Going back to where you started in the CW division was a smart move and you’ll be back up into the main event ranks in no time.
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Post by Quixote Della Torre on Nov 25, 2019 12:17:35 GMT -5
Thanks dude! Anyone looking for insight about how to get better, tap into this man (and I'm not just saying that because he was nice to me). We're in a group chat together called the Braintrust and Shadowlove can always be relied upon to share pearls of wisdom.
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Post by Corey Bull on Nov 25, 2019 13:30:49 GMT -5
Well man, since I’m catching part of the blame for this, tell how you thought my first rp worked as the new improved hatebringer
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Post by Shadowlove on Nov 25, 2019 22:38:18 GMT -5
Well man, since I’m catching part of the blame for this, tell how you thought my first rp worked as the new improved hatebringer Still a work in progress but that’s a good thing since I know that you’re kind of in Bull revamp-mode.
I once told Walter that I felt what made him a monster was his conflicting feelings that he didn’t see himself as a monster and that Etta was kind of manipulating his actions into becoming a monster and that he would turn on her.
Bull is, plain and simply, a monster, no feeling of remorse with his actions, he brutalizes people not because he can, more so, because he wants too.
Your “off-camera” work was originally designed to show Bull in a different light before appearing “on camera” and now Bull has fallen completely into darkness.
Here is where some juicy stuff can happen for you. I think it’s time to reintroduce Bull’s sisters, Dove & Raven Darkhawk. Use Dove as some kind of inspirational catalytic confidante that tries to find that redeeming factor in Bull by influencing and manipulating his action through her visions of seeing the lighter side of his past that will in some way keep him from falling back deeper and deeper into his very own abysmal hell.
And use Raven as that less than inspirational catalytic confidante that finds that unredeeming factor in Bull as some kind of breath of fresh air by influencing and motivating his present day destructiveness that keeps him focused on the here and now by wreaking havoc on people that keeps him planted in his very own abysmal hell.
As for your shoot to match the new and improved Corey Bull, I know that your influences have been Hannibal Lector and Bane as intellectually brilliant, cultured and sophisticated, but to me, Bull needs to be a manifestation of himself as an extreme sociopathic attitude and antisocial behavior that lacks any sense of conscienceless humanity.
You find a way to come up with that, AW, will be paraphrasing Col. Kurtz in Apocalypse Now by saying, “The Horror... The Horror.”
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Sam Kidsgrove
Professional Wrestler
International Champion
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Post by Sam Kidsgrove on Nov 26, 2019 12:49:04 GMT -5
Go to town on Kidsgrove. Go.
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Post by Shadowlove on Nov 26, 2019 13:44:17 GMT -5
Go to town on Kidsgrove. Go. Man, this is like tearing down a family member before Thanksgiving...
You might’ve not come up with the main concept of the scripted style role-playing but Sam Kidsgrove is the only one that truly mastered the art of this style of scripted reality.
There have been a select few that used this scripted style to score meaningless victories over The Hollywood Elite, but they were just paying tribute to your greatness.
There are times when your shoot becomes secondary to the action around the scripted reality and isn’t as hard hitting as it should be at times. But everyone goes through that phase when role-playing and can be an easy fix. Ryan Lockhart’s genius wrote a very insightful must read for everyone and not just for those having trouble with shoot:
Overall, you’ve proven that Sam Kidsgrove is a true top tier main event performer and I’m looking forward to seeing your creativity flow once again in AW.
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Post by 𝗖𝗢𝗥𝗘𝗬 𝗕𝗟𝗔𝗖𝗞 on Nov 26, 2019 13:58:22 GMT -5
Do your worst.
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Post by Shadowlove on Nov 26, 2019 14:40:01 GMT -5
There’s a reason why you are considered one the most respected characters in e-fedding, you’re one of the very few that knows and understands your character inside and out. You can see that in your writing.
You can close your eyes and when you open them, Corey Black comes to life.
F.P.V., KOS, Walter, Richards, Dandy, Lissie, Wade/Wesley, Kidsgrove, Bull, Zombie/Odin, T.F.K/Big Kev, any myself are probably the other best in AW that actively know and understand their character inside and out and writing becomes second nature.
Your only weakness that I see is being the Hardcore Champion. You’re definitely a true gunslinger and know how to shoot but I don’t see anyone other than another true gunslinger that can match your shooting skills at the moment. And I don’t think you’re the kind of guy that would “tank” himself in order to drop the title.
I wish that I could’ve seen Corey Black in the prime of your run in WCF, that would’ve been must see TV. Your 7 Deadly Sins Series was an amazing piece of work that everyone should read if they get a chance.
I’m interested in seeing more from the relationship dynamic between Corey Black and Nikki Venus. I know that part of your story is suffering under the Hardcore rules. And you deserve a seat back at the table in the 4k word count main event scene.
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Post by Frank Venable on Nov 26, 2019 18:24:54 GMT -5
I might as well get in on this too, lol. Show me what's on your mind, Shadow.
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Post by Shadowlove on Nov 26, 2019 19:23:36 GMT -5
I might as well get in on this too, lol. Show me what's on your mind, Shadow. Thinking of something derogatory to say about F.P.V, I can only think about what I said about your partner in crime, Corey Black. You can see why you’re considered another one the most respected characters in e-fedding, you can tell by your writing that you know and understand the nuances of your character too. Your run through the WOTY tournament proved how good you are as a writer. Your work against KOS, Kidsgrove, Lissie, and Walter was no easy feat especially facing them in back-to-back weeks. Going 3-1 is a pretty good month for us average human beings. I just hope that your characters not too down about losing the AW World Championship to Walter?
Because I know from personal experience that he’ll bounce back from this loss because egomaniacs like F.P.V. & Shadow don’t stay down for long. What worries me about your character is all the caffeine that he’s been consuming lately. How much caffeine is F.P.V. downing per day in coffee & Mountain Dew? Is all that caffeine make him too high strung for his own good? And did all that high-strung nervousness cause him to lose the AW World Championship to Walter? Is he going to become an even more high-strung Uber-face? Did business franchising his coffee shop, The People's Grounds, around the world, making him millionaire in the process after going public, cause him to go to war with Starbucks over the global coffee market? Damn, I sound like I downed to much caffeine today. lol
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Post by Grayson Ward on Nov 27, 2019 2:12:10 GMT -5
I just posted my first RP here! I'd love to hear some feedback
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Post by Shadowlove on Nov 27, 2019 4:18:17 GMT -5
I just posted my first RP here! I'd love to hear some feedback You’ve written a very, very good opening roleplay that will draw the viewer into the world of Grayson Ward much like what a former female World Champion did when she first arrived on the AW scene.
Your opening scene caught the very essence of your character with just the right amount of origin story to keep the reader wanting to hear Grayson’s complete background story. I can see that you’re going to have a very unique take on your standard “batty” vigilante apprentice fanfare flying through the seedy side of the Dinkytown area of Minneapolis. Your character is fueled by the tragedies of his past and that fuel is going to somehow burn what he thinks is the darkness of AW by turning that darkness into a bright shining light. Your shoot was good and strong and shows you have a complete grasp of your character’s voice. Your closing scene was a very nice touch that shows that AW is just about to undergo some kind of unbeknownst reconstruction in Grayson Ward’s eyes.
I’m looking forward to seeing the continuation of Grayson Ward’s story arc here in AW.
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Post by Grayson Ward on Nov 27, 2019 5:10:12 GMT -5
Thanks! I appreciate you taking the time to read it and give some feedback!
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Post by James Nightingale on Nov 27, 2019 6:43:16 GMT -5
Would be great if you could give me any feedback from my first 2 RPs. I’m like a sponge at the minute trying to soak up as much knowledge as possible to make myself better.
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