Spencer Adams
Professional Wrestler
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Post by Spencer Adams on Sept 18, 2019 19:19:48 GMT -5
Really, the tournament seemed to have come down to you and stylez match which is fine. I think you came pretty focused for the most part or as focused as you needed to be, but maybe at times it riffs to a mild, unapologetic fault. It's still quality throughout though, but it can feel just a tad repetitive. I knew what you were saying or trying to say though. The best part is the roughneck energy that lends itself to the deathmatch kayfabe. That's cool to see. It's a fine RP. A bit surface level, but the match style is surface level in itself, right? Overall rating: 7/10
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Spencer Adams
Professional Wrestler
Wrestler of the Life
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Post by Spencer Adams on Sept 18, 2019 19:51:41 GMT -5
This isn't a negative piece, but it doesn't scream standout or major positive to me. The effort is there, but I'm not consistently feeling the gimmick change stands out as more than a nickname in this rp. The last two scenes that focus on Karlie have their good points, but I feel like overall, you don't have much to say outside of "You're a gross slut and I will win cause I am good." But at the same time, it loops back a couple times to Kennedy self deprecating about her standing in this match and a potential world title match. She talks about how anything can happen if she gets their basically, but she still has this thing where she feels like she's being Punk'd? Kennedy might not be as accomplished as a Dandy DiVito, but she is a contracted talent that has held gold before in AW. The narration scenes and transitions are good and probably the best part, but they also feel scattered. Again, I'm not trying to bash the work. I just feel really incredibly indifferent to the majority of what I just read. It's a bigger word count though and this could partially be you striving and learning to adjust. All good, I get that. Still, this didn't turn me off, but it didn't perk my ears up. Overall rating: 5/10
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Post by Corey Bull on Sept 22, 2019 7:30:07 GMT -5
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Teo Blaze
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Post by Teo Blaze on Sept 22, 2019 22:33:42 GMT -5
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Post by Lissie Hope on Sept 29, 2019 5:01:08 GMT -5
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Post by Roger Payton Jr on Sept 29, 2019 20:47:34 GMT -5
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Post by Lissie Hope on Sept 29, 2019 21:28:21 GMT -5
Lmao I do not remember posting this at all.
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Post by Kennedy Matthews on Oct 4, 2019 0:44:36 GMT -5
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Post by 𝗖𝗢𝗥𝗘𝗬 𝗕𝗟𝗔𝗖𝗞 on Oct 19, 2019 22:15:25 GMT -5
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