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New RP
May 5, 2019 22:34:24 GMT -5
via mobile
Post by Crimson Blackwell on May 5, 2019 22:34:24 GMT -5
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Post by Daniel Westbrook on May 5, 2019 22:48:41 GMT -5
I am not an expert so don't take what I say to heart. First off, I love the title of your rp. It made me think of the Anime show. As for the rp itself, it was good but you could have broken up that giant wall of text. Show us what your character is doing during the text. Shows us what makes him tick. I understand that rping on a phone or mobile device is a pain. I rp primarily on an iPad.
You have a good story. Give us more.
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