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Post by Deleted on Sept 28, 2018 11:38:42 GMT -5
How about some general vibes. The more I can make him his own man and less in Harry Diderot's shadow the better.
Also, I enjoy making these 1st person narratives w/ him because it gives some comedy gold to his usual behaviors.
Anyways, thoughts and the impressions that you get are all welcome.
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Post by Dandy DiVito on Sept 28, 2018 13:03:09 GMT -5
I don’t feel like I’m able to give you the feedback you’re looking for exactly since this RP was the first of yours I’ve seen and I can’t compare this character to your other one. That said, I loved your RP. When I read RPs and I hear the voice of the character, I fall in love quick. That was absolutely happening for me through yours. You’re a vivid writer, dude. Goddamn. You kick ass at verbal picture painting. I look forward to reading more of your stuff and getting more and more attached to your character.
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