T.F.K.
Professional Wrestler
Tailor Made For Greatness
Posts: 549
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Post by T.F.K. on Aug 20, 2018 7:31:14 GMT -5
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Post by Beau Del Sol on Aug 21, 2018 9:09:32 GMT -5
I wish I could repay the favor but your rp is solid. You know your niche with TFK and play it up to a key. I’ve got nothing negative to say. The road trip was a neat twist with Felix and Shaw. I really have no critiqueing. Is that how you would put that lol.
Well only thing I could see is more depth but that’s just me being a picky asshole so I could make a comment!
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Post by Beau Del Sol on Sept 4, 2018 18:45:38 GMT -5
Ok TFK you know I gotta be picky!
The shoot was fucking great. I loved seeing TFK the way he is after his loss and the way he’s taking it in and pushing it back out into Corey. Your flow and subtleness was good too.
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The RP was great but I wish I could’ve read a story. Like I said the drunken tweak to TFK was good while still being “himself” but I wanted more depth. Something more for me to chew on. It left me loving your RP but unsure what direction the next one is going which would have had me salivating for this weeks RP.
Just my two cents. Hope it helps. Your pretty laced up. Oh and the format... wish your dialect and paragraphs were better defined.
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