Sam Kidsgrove
Professional Wrestler
International Champion
Posts: 476
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Post by Sam Kidsgrove on Jun 8, 2018 16:04:25 GMT -5
Yo Dawgs, I would love to know what you guys think about Sam right now overall. What am I doing well, what do I need to work on, where you can see it going. You know, the usual. Do not hesitate to say what you think, I'm never afraid to take on criticism or advice.
Thanks <3
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Sam Kidsgrove
Professional Wrestler
International Champion
Posts: 476
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Post by Sam Kidsgrove on Jun 11, 2018 14:25:36 GMT -5
Anybody?
Dust.
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Bonnie Blue
Professional Wrestler
UCI Champion
Posts: 392
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Post by Bonnie Blue on Aug 15, 2018 17:05:54 GMT -5
First of all, I personally love the film script format of your rp's. It's perfect for the Kidsgrove gimmick. I dig the way you work shoot into regular dialogue, often as part of regular conversation. Also, this new turn where Kidsgrove is a ruthless villain who will do anything to get what he wants, but clever enough to hide it all behind a friendly persona and heavy PR work is genius. It shows a huge development from washed-up actor with addiction problems to a man who has seized absolute control of his own destiny -- even if it makes him a bad guy. It's easy to relate to and makes him sympathetic. And like I said before, loved the collaboration between you and TFK with the shared history. It really made the overall story stand out.
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Post by Deleted on Aug 21, 2018 1:14:24 GMT -5
I really, really liked your Uprising RP! I love how Kidsgrove has evolved. His voice is very prominent. He feels very realistic. I could imagine Sam Kidsgrove being a real person. I also very much love how you took advantage of TFK having a similar gimmick, and adding that to your story, making it so that you were able to blend your shoot and CD into one. It was seemless, and was very well put together. I also still very much adore the script style. Not only does it help your RPs standout, but it makes your RPs fun to read, and really matches the Kidsgrove character. I really don't have anything bad to say. The only real flaw I saw was a couple grammar hiccups here and there, but that can happen to anyone and everyone. This was really great work. You took down TFK for good reason. You earned it! Congrats. 💜
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Post by M͓̽o͓̽n͓̽e͓̽y͓̽ M͓̽i͓̽k͓̽e͓̽ on Sept 10, 2018 21:05:34 GMT -5
Long overdue response from me, but I admire your work, brother! Full of surprises, humor, awesome styling, I can't really say anything bad for "constructive criticism" since you really *have* your own, and it works phenomenally. Truth be told, I always loved RP for the fact that most of us can come up with more thoughtful, insightful, entertaining and enjoyable scripts/monologues than most of today's Hollywood/entertainment writers. You are certainly no exception to that. Keep up the amazing work, hope to get a rematch some time down the line!!!
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